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MẪU 1
PHAM KHANH HOA D.O.B: June 26, 1989 Cellphone: +84934663113 Email: hoapk.hrc@gmail.com Position applied: BUSINESS ANALYST Being a professional consultant that enables me to get promoted and accomplishing MBA degree within next 5 years. Thoughtful Good critical thinking Self-motivated School : FOREIGN TRADE UNIVERSITY OF VIETNAM, 2011 Bachelor of International Economics and Business Cumulative GPA for 6 of 8 semesters: 7.8 Research: Vietnam Government’s policies to surmount the economic crisis 2008 US FED’s monetary policies to surmount the financial crisis 2007-2009 Facts and solutions of transfer pricing in Vietnam
Comment [TP1]: Overally, you have a good and clearly designed CV. Your achievements are significant, showing that your ability and representing yourself is remarkable. However, concentrate more on some of the mistakes and our suggestions, more importantly, show your attitude more in attending the job. Wish the best luck to you!
CAREER OBJECTIVE TYPICAL CHARACTERISTICS EDUCATION BACKGROUND
Comment [TP2]: If you want to express your result, you could provide how good your GPA is in the school, for eg, top 10, 20,…of the Faculty,… Comment [TP3]: Are they marked by the teachers or others who are involved? If they are, you could provide more information about the quality of those researches.
SOCIAL ACTIVITIES
HUMAN RESOURCES CLUB – FOREIGN TRADE UNIVERSITY Hanoi, Vietnam Head of Consultancy and Training Department, member of managing board May, 2008– Jan.,2010 contributed in scheming and organizing “the forth Business and Economics Career Festival-BECF” which took place in one year was leader of media team of the competition “The Golden Candidate” to manage the idea-creating team and organize “Press conference” established the skill-informing channel of the club at
Comment [TP4]: Should use “Ving” form
Comment [TP5]: If you want to express the long-lasting time, you could use other words such as “last”,… Comment [TP6]: Should not combine words by yourself. Usually, it could be used: “ideadevelopment” or simply, just “ID Team, who develop/create new Ideas”
website svjob.net, facebook and wordpress page “HRC skillbox” together with consultancy and training team Achievement: attracted thousands of students to participate in BECF: over 1,000 candidates for “The golden candidate competition”, 800 participants for “Tomorrow office program” and 8,000 visitors for “Career day” reach over 20,000 search results of our competition in Google SEPAKTAKRAW FEDERATION OF VIETNAM Hanoi, Vietnam Manager of volunteer team of the sport in the third Asian Indoor Games - AIG3 1st – 15th of October, 2009 Managed 51 volunteers of the sport to assist in logistics for 12 international sport teams Dealt with unexpected problems that occurred during the Games Achievement: was awarded a special diploma for “Excellent contribution” DEPARTMENT OF FOREIGN AFFAIRS OF HANOI Hanoi, Vietnam Leader of Etiquette team at airport 5th – 12th of October,2010 managed 12 volunteers to welcome international guests and do custom clearance served VIPs during the time they were at the airport Achievement: Certificate for enthusiastic dedication WORK EXPERIENCES
Comment [TP9]: After listing your chosen activities, you could note precisely in 1-2 sentence to show How they are useful for the job, How you could manage and get over Difficulties,… Comment [TP10]: When you are applying for the job, work experience is more concerned than the activities you have attended. Therefore, put this before “Activities” Comment [TP7]: Good job when you could show how you did achieve through numbers
Comment [TP8]: Could leave an example here to show your ability of reflex
VINA ELECTRIC Hanoi, Vietnam Director Assistant and July, 2009- present
CORPORATION Import staff
negotiating with foreign partners managing logistics of consignments, making international payment being corporate delegate attending the International Exhibition Elenex
Comment [TP11]: In terms of…?
Comment [TP12]: “one among/the delegate of Vina Electric Corporation to attend….”
Achievement making the company be exclusive agency of German and Indian partners saving over Euro 1,000 of company asset by catching favorable exchange rate negotiating successfully in the Exhibition to prolong exclusive agency agreement with German partner and lower down the price
Comment [TP13]: You are not the only one who raise the position of the company. This is minor but leave a not-minor-impression to interviewers.
Comment [TP14]: Grammar: low down Comment [TP15]: Could provide more information here? How much or percentage you could low down?
FOREIGN LANGUAGE HOBBIES
English Speaking: good Listening: excellent
Writing: good Reading: excellent
Football including commenting and playing reading book and listening to instrumental music walking in the afternoon REFERENCE Mr. Mai Van Cuong – Director of Vina Electric Corporation Email: mvcuong@vinaelectric.biz . Phone: +84 4 36342902 Ms. Vu Thanh Ha – KPMG advisory assistant, former president of HR club Email: havt.hrc@gmail.com. Phone: +84 982 336616
Comment [TP16]: A 2 page CV is good, but you should make it look like a completed 2 page CV. Shouldn’t leave too much blank space like this. Comment [TP17]: This is not a mobile phone, could we contact Mr Mai Van Cuong to check the information given above by calling this number?
MẪU 2
Letter of Application Tên ứng viên:……………. Địa chỉ:……………….. Mobile: ............................. Email:truongnguyenacc@gmail.com
Personnel Manager ……………………………………………………………………………
…………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………… Dear Sir/ Madam: I would appreciate your kindness in considering my application for an accountant position. A brief resume of my background is enclosed.
I graduated from Ha Noi University of Industry, majoring in the accounting. I can speak English and use MS – Word, Excel, Access, and Power Point rather well, Misa, Bravo,A exell, APDC, VBMS. I have more than 6 years experience in general accounts (General accountant (follow up payable and receivable account, salary, tax report, summary expenses, cost, profit and loss report)
- From August 2004 to August 2006, I worked at …… Co,.Ltd - From August 2006 to September 2007, I worked at ………. Co,.Ltd. - From September 2007 to march 2009, I worked at ………… Co,.Ltd. - From mảrch 2009 to now , I worked at ,,,,,,,,,,,,, JSC.
With experience of balances the account, tax balances-sheet, drafting a contract…., I believe that this position for which I am particularly well qualified. Beside, I am a happy, self-starter, creative, confident, reliable and invoke the spirits. I enjoy working with people very much, I work exactly. In addition, with the knowledge I had learnt and done. I’ll do well in this position.
Your review of the enclosed details of my background will be greatly appreciated. Should you wish to arrange a personal interview, I am willing to come to your office at a time convenient to you.
Thank you for your valuable time, and I look forward to hearing from you in the nearest time.
Respectfully yours. Tên của bạn
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PHAM KHANH HOA D.O.B: June 26, 1989 Cellphone: +84934663113 Email: hoapk.hrc@gmail.com Position applied: BUSINESS ANALYST Being a professional consultant that enables me to get promoted and accomplishing MBA degree within next 5 years. Thoughtful Good critical thinking Self-motivated School : FOREIGN TRADE UNIVERSITY OF VIETNAM, 2011 Bachelor of International Economics and Business Cumulative GPA for 6 of 8 semesters: 7.8 Research: Vietnam Government’s policies to surmount the economic crisis 2008 US FED’s monetary policies to surmount the financial crisis 2007-2009 Facts and solutions of transfer pricing in Vietnam
Comment [TP1]: Overally, you have a good and clearly designed CV. Your achievements are significant, showing that your ability and representing yourself is remarkable. However, concentrate more on some of the mistakes and our suggestions, more importantly, show your attitude more in attending the job. Wish the best luck to you!
CAREER OBJECTIVE TYPICAL CHARACTERISTICS EDUCATION BACKGROUND
Comment [TP2]: If you want to express your result, you could provide how good your GPA is in the school, for eg, top 10, 20,…of the Faculty,… Comment [TP3]: Are they marked by the teachers or others who are involved? If they are, you could provide more information about the quality of those researches.
SOCIAL ACTIVITIES
HUMAN RESOURCES CLUB – FOREIGN TRADE UNIVERSITY Hanoi, Vietnam Head of Consultancy and Training Department, member of managing board May, 2008– Jan.,2010 contributed in scheming and organizing “the forth Business and Economics Career Festival-BECF” which took place in one year was leader of media team of the competition “The Golden Candidate” to manage the idea-creating team and organize “Press conference” established the skill-informing channel of the club at
Comment [TP4]: Should use “Ving” form
Comment [TP5]: If you want to express the long-lasting time, you could use other words such as “last”,… Comment [TP6]: Should not combine words by yourself. Usually, it could be used: “ideadevelopment” or simply, just “ID Team, who develop/create new Ideas”
website svjob.net, facebook and wordpress page “HRC skillbox” together with consultancy and training team Achievement: attracted thousands of students to participate in BECF: over 1,000 candidates for “The golden candidate competition”, 800 participants for “Tomorrow office program” and 8,000 visitors for “Career day” reach over 20,000 search results of our competition in Google SEPAKTAKRAW FEDERATION OF VIETNAM Hanoi, Vietnam Manager of volunteer team of the sport in the third Asian Indoor Games - AIG3 1st – 15th of October, 2009 Managed 51 volunteers of the sport to assist in logistics for 12 international sport teams Dealt with unexpected problems that occurred during the Games Achievement: was awarded a special diploma for “Excellent contribution” DEPARTMENT OF FOREIGN AFFAIRS OF HANOI Hanoi, Vietnam Leader of Etiquette team at airport 5th – 12th of October,2010 managed 12 volunteers to welcome international guests and do custom clearance served VIPs during the time they were at the airport Achievement: Certificate for enthusiastic dedication WORK EXPERIENCES
Comment [TP9]: After listing your chosen activities, you could note precisely in 1-2 sentence to show How they are useful for the job, How you could manage and get over Difficulties,… Comment [TP10]: When you are applying for the job, work experience is more concerned than the activities you have attended. Therefore, put this before “Activities” Comment [TP7]: Good job when you could show how you did achieve through numbers
Comment [TP8]: Could leave an example here to show your ability of reflex
VINA ELECTRIC Hanoi, Vietnam Director Assistant and July, 2009- present
CORPORATION Import staff
negotiating with foreign partners managing logistics of consignments, making international payment being corporate delegate attending the International Exhibition Elenex
Comment [TP11]: In terms of…?
Comment [TP12]: “one among/the delegate of Vina Electric Corporation to attend….”
Achievement making the company be exclusive agency of German and Indian partners saving over Euro 1,000 of company asset by catching favorable exchange rate negotiating successfully in the Exhibition to prolong exclusive agency agreement with German partner and lower down the price
Comment [TP13]: You are not the only one who raise the position of the company. This is minor but leave a not-minor-impression to interviewers.
Comment [TP14]: Grammar: low down Comment [TP15]: Could provide more information here? How much or percentage you could low down?
FOREIGN LANGUAGE HOBBIES
English Speaking: good Listening: excellent
Writing: good Reading: excellent
Football including commenting and playing reading book and listening to instrumental music walking in the afternoon REFERENCE Mr. Mai Van Cuong – Director of Vina Electric Corporation Email: mvcuong@vinaelectric.biz . Phone: +84 4 36342902 Ms. Vu Thanh Ha – KPMG advisory assistant, former president of HR club Email: havt.hrc@gmail.com. Phone: +84 982 336616
Comment [TP16]: A 2 page CV is good, but you should make it look like a completed 2 page CV. Shouldn’t leave too much blank space like this. Comment [TP17]: This is not a mobile phone, could we contact Mr Mai Van Cuong to check the information given above by calling this number?
MẪU 2
Letter of Application Tên ứng viên:……………. Địa chỉ:……………….. Mobile: ............................. Email:truongnguyenacc@gmail.com
Personnel Manager ……………………………………………………………………………
…………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………… Dear Sir/ Madam: I would appreciate your kindness in considering my application for an accountant position. A brief resume of my background is enclosed.
I graduated from Ha Noi University of Industry, majoring in the accounting. I can speak English and use MS – Word, Excel, Access, and Power Point rather well, Misa, Bravo,A exell, APDC, VBMS. I have more than 6 years experience in general accounts (General accountant (follow up payable and receivable account, salary, tax report, summary expenses, cost, profit and loss report)
- From August 2004 to August 2006, I worked at …… Co,.Ltd - From August 2006 to September 2007, I worked at ………. Co,.Ltd. - From September 2007 to march 2009, I worked at ………… Co,.Ltd. - From mảrch 2009 to now , I worked at ,,,,,,,,,,,,, JSC.
With experience of balances the account, tax balances-sheet, drafting a contract…., I believe that this position for which I am particularly well qualified. Beside, I am a happy, self-starter, creative, confident, reliable and invoke the spirits. I enjoy working with people very much, I work exactly. In addition, with the knowledge I had learnt and done. I’ll do well in this position.
Your review of the enclosed details of my background will be greatly appreciated. Should you wish to arrange a personal interview, I am willing to come to your office at a time convenient to you.
Thank you for your valuable time, and I look forward to hearing from you in the nearest time.
Respectfully yours. Tên của bạn